Tuesday, August 30, 2011


One day there was a girl named Alice was in a hurry to get home and drop a peaces of paper that had her name on it & password to her blog. A group of girls found it and put a  picture of her . They put things that were not true about.   the next day she found out  why people were staring at her during class.  She could not go any were with out people staring at her ,and saying mean things to her. She tough it would all go a way but it stayed like that for a very long time.

                                                               THE END

             That's why I think you shouldn't cyber bully people and post thing about them and not take to people you don't know.


  1. This a good story and I like how you wrote it! Do you think something like this has ever happened before?

  2. I liked your story but, you put comma's into it so it can make sense

  3. I think that you did a good job on your story.The only thing is, is that you left a couple words out, and also I like how you were talking to the people and how your telling not to cyber bullying.